Finally!! I made her a character sheet... took me ages!!!! XD The headshots are soooo wrong made bleh I might remake them but I'm too tired atm. They look nothing like they look when drawn traditionally O.o Those of you who knew her ...noticed probably that I changed her clothes totally and her hair style and color (was blue at first then black now blue again xD and I'll stick to blue xD) At first I wanted to make small changes but it changed on a drastic level xD. PANTIESS!!! XDD DOWNLOAD to be able to read what the description says xD
I seriously need to work on her face >_> srsly ...it looks way uglier digitally than on paper!!!
[edit] hid the faces BWAHAHAAAHH!
Besides that the legs are too long ... and the back view onr had the head too small I think if you spot any other mistakes pwease point them out T^T
mai dezbracata de atat nu o puteai face/ xD hahahah oricum foarte sexy n-am ce spune am ramas ceva de genu O_o wtf?! goddammitwowfuckholycraponflyingtoasthowthefuckwhengoddamitkewl.... XDDD oricum foarte bine *pat pat* continua drawing hot looking girls si vei primi un coockie x3 bdw...raspunde si tu la telefonul acela din acea cauza este creat!
1.) I can barely read the descriptions so next time change the fonts or make the type size bigger.
2.) I like the character and colors.
3.) Now for the clothes, why are the back part of her pants missing. Is it just to show a "badass" style or to show off her butt? I think it's silly that the whole pants are there except just her butt-cheeks. It should be either latex pants, parachute pants (kind of like the old prince of persia oriental pants), or gothic patterned bottoms. Her gloves should be completely closed and no openings on the fingers (or make gloves that have half of the fingers all showing instead of just 2). The green material on the bra-corset should be removed, it looks like it was just added there randomly.
4.) Now for the body. Her expression is completely opposite than what it should be according to your description. It should be a blank stare or determined. She looks too cheerful.
5.) Lastly, what makes this character special? If I see her on a cover of a magazine what am I going to think? Would i feel terrified or "wow-ed" by a name Teressa? Her last name makes me think of Soul Calibur. As an anime character Teressa looks mediocre. A few minor touches here and there will show your first true BOLD original character named ........ <--enter new name!
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CAND VII? Q_Q
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And I think you did a good job with the faces!!;D
Keep it up!
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Bunnies will rule the world!!!!
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If you think Konan is the smex, copy this to your sig
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IS emo ATM
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources"- Albert Einstein
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IS emo ATM
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources"- Albert Einstein
But I liked them...oh well I'm looking forward when you redraw them!
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Bunnies will rule the world!!!!
(\\__/)
( ^ ^)
( o o ) ----->
If you think Konan is the smex, copy this to your sig
--
IS emo ATM
"The secret to creativity is knowing how to hide your sources"- Albert Einstein
oricum foarte sexy n-am ce spune am ramas ceva de genu O_o wtf?! goddammitwowfuckholycraponflyingtoasthowthefuckwhengoddamitkewl....
XDDD oricum foarte bine *pat pat* continua drawing hot looking girls si vei primi un coockie x3
bdw...raspunde si tu la telefonul acela din acea cauza este creat!
luv ya infidel
1.) I can barely read the descriptions so next time change the fonts or make the type size bigger.
2.) I like the character and colors.
3.) Now for the clothes, why are the back part of her pants missing. Is it just to show a "badass" style or to show off her butt? I think it's silly that the whole pants are there except just her butt-cheeks. It should be either latex pants, parachute pants (kind of like the old prince of persia oriental pants), or gothic patterned bottoms. Her gloves should be completely closed and no openings on the fingers (or make gloves that have half of the fingers all showing instead of just 2). The green material on the bra-corset should be removed, it looks like it was just added there randomly.
4.) Now for the body. Her expression is completely opposite than what it should be according to your description. It should be a blank stare or determined. She looks too cheerful.
5.) Lastly, what makes this character special? If I see her on a cover of a magazine what am I going to think? Would i feel terrified or "wow-ed" by a name Teressa? Her last name makes me think of Soul Calibur. As an anime character Teressa looks mediocre. A few minor touches here and there will show your first true BOLD original character named ........ <--enter new name!
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